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Wednesday, 23 November 2016

The mysterious box?




I wasn’t sure what was in the box, but i sure was excited to discover what was in this mysterious box. when i opened the mysterious box there was a flashing gold light coming from inside. I screamed treasure!! I was so excited.When the shiny gold light stopped i peeked inside i found surprisingly big gold slabs.when i went outside i screamed to my dog were rich!!!
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  1. Joanne Clark15 March 2017 at 12:45

    That was an exciting box, lots of exclamation marks!{no Drama blog though :(]

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  2. Anonymous9 August 2017 at 11:35

    I really liked how you used a lot of vocabulary. This reminds me of when I wrote something like this but it was about what was behind the mysterious door. I think you could make more paragraphs about the mysterious box.

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